Girl Talk

And what power is this to keep me so small sister to the womb that brew you your mothers are we all our babe our brother father fear has forever been your fall still so afraid to walk by my side I've never heard of rue from a man who's tried

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 1/13/2019 2:35:00 PM

This is outstanding, truly - so profound and, for me, definitely a route to very strong emotional feelings/thoughts. This transported me to a familiar 'feel' in either a layer of my philosophy, heart OR BOTH. I leave thinking both and no longer want to hopscotch for I've put my 'serious thought' hat on. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 1/13/2019 3:59:00 PM

Thank you so much CayCay, that means a lot to me. This one's old and close to my heart. Hopscotch is better in the summer anyway ;) Hugs! xomo

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/8/2017 9:51:00 AM

Thoughtful!