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Girl of My Dreams

The one and only girl of my dreams, In my slumber, together forever is what it seems, And then I awake, and now reality hits. I feel like a quarterback that can’t escape the blitz. Here, please insert love-struck dummy memes.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/9/2016 12:03:00 PM

Gerald,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Gerald Alcantara
Date: 7/11/2016 4:45:00 PM

Linda, Thanks so much for the comment! I am a very new writer, but enjoy it very much and it is quickly becoming a passion of mine.. I joined this community for the exact reason of growing as a writer through constructive criticism, as well as reading the work of others. So thank you for stopping by, and please feel free to comment on anything you may read from me! Cheers Linda!

Skat A

Date: 7/8/2016 12:52:00 PM

stopping by again:) have a great weekend

Gerald Alcantara
Date: 7/8/2016 4:16:00 PM

Thanks SKAT! Have a great weekend!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/7/2016 5:52:00 PM

Great limerick Gerald:-) hugs Jan xx

Gerald Alcantara
Date: 7/8/2016 4:15:00 PM

Thanks so much Jan!

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2016 5:17:00 PM

Gerald Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I TOO THINK YOU ARE AN Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*

Gerald Alcantara
Date: 7/8/2016 4:14:00 PM

Thanks so much SKAT! :) I look forward to sharing more and growing as a writer amongst this great community of poets, thanks for your feedback! :)