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Opening tenderly my eyes, my first cry echoes all around; I extend my arms for an embrace, An unwelcome reception is all that I get. .....I should have known. Juggling studies and the chores, my efforts yield as much as they can; I outdo myself expecting an encouragement, Unenthusiastic remarks is all that I get. .....I should have known. Aspiring to be successful in life, my hardwork is sure to accomplish my dreams; I try to convince people of what I can do, Dismissive criticism is all that I get. .....I should have known. I should have known all my life, In vain would be the expectation and regret; I would brace and hone myself instead, So that some day....... appreciation and praise is all that I get.

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Date: 6/11/2014 1:42:00 PM
Very Touching, This Stirring Version Of Another's Life Reflecting Countless Lives Across Time Here In Babylon....KLove *
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Date: 6/10/2014 1:41:00 PM
A powerful write against the male chauvinistic system. I am proud of you my friend. Have myself written many poems regarding this subject. Keep writing Thanks for sharing
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Date: 6/9/2014 7:31:00 AM
Shruti, , Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/9/2014 7:11:00 AM
A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured, shruti
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Date: 5/21/2014 6:49:00 PM
Shruti, amazing poem... Linda
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Date: 5/21/2014 11:51:00 AM
cool write very creative
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