Girl Child

I am conceived
yet not finished
 
I am formed
yet not born
 
I am born
yet not alive
 
I am here
yet not seen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Wellington Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 6:22 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup, Ruchi. May your journey here be a fulfilled one. Luv, Joy (Jew)
A   Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 5:38 PM
wow interesting, enjoyed reading this one today, have a good one..P.D.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 7:15 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup...enjoyed your poetry today.. hope u will check out the contest scene.. good luck with luv...
Brown Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 5:22 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ruchi. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 4:31 AM
Very creative and deep in meanings write, I appreciate it the philosophy of birth, ruchi
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace