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Girl

Girl Young child Innocent Tender calm mind Knows nothing of the brutal worldy ways The wretched world hurts her manifold times Cautious sad mind Silently Sheds tears Now Photo used : 1 Date: 8/16/2020

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Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 8/20/2020 2:15:00 PM

A strong message about the innocence being crushed in a real world! Great work, Rama! Love and best wishes, Mala

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/21/2020 3:07:00 AM

Thanks for your appreciation. It makes my day. Saw your write. Outstanding! I too love nature like you. The calmness and innocence of the girl struck me, nature struck you . It is interesting how different people perceive images. Take care. God bless you. Love and hugs. Rama

John Watt

Date: 8/19/2020 9:31:00 AM

A lovely depiction of innocence in a harsh world. Best wishes ~ John

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/19/2020 10:15:00 AM

Thanks. I saw my reflection in that image. This is the truth of many women in this world. Your positive comment makes my day. So happy to read it. God bless you. Regards Rama