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Girl

Girl
Young child
Innocent
Tender calm mind
Knows nothing of the brutal worldy ways

The wretched world hurts her manifold times
Cautious sad mind
Silently 
Sheds tears
Now
 
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Date: 8/16/2020

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Malabika Ray Choudhury

August 20, 2020 at 2:15 PM

A strong message about the innocence being crushed in a real world! Great work, Rama! Love and best wishes, Mala

Rama Balasubramanian

August 21, 2020 at 3:07 AM

Thanks for your appreciation. It makes my day. Saw your write. Outstanding! I too love nature like you. The calmness and innocence of the girl struck me, nature struck you . It is interesting how different people perceive images. Take care. God bless you. Love and hugs. Rama

John Watt

August 19, 2020 at 9:31 AM

A lovely depiction of innocence in a harsh world. Best wishes ~ John

Rama Balasubramanian

August 19, 2020 at 10:15 AM

Thanks. I saw my reflection in that image. This is the truth of many women in this world. Your positive comment makes my day. So happy to read it. God bless you. Regards Rama

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