Giraffe

Giraffe long slim neck Giant black tongue eats leaves Beautiful design Reticulated brown Outlined in black background of white Fights like a tiger

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James Fraser

Date: 8/10/2009 11:03:00 AM

A most strange animal Sara, but a delightful one, nice Haiku>>James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/8/2009 6:21:00 AM

Sara, wonderful poetry to read on a Saturday morning. Thank you for sharing your Haiku's. Love, Carol

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/8/2009 5:50:00 AM

Sara what a wonderful haiku series - Wonderful description of an amazing animal - God Bless, MJ

Sara Lokken

Date: 8/7/2009 8:26:00 PM

A very exact description of a giraffe....and yes, it is a beautiful design...Best wishes, Sara:)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/7/2009 8:13:00 PM

They are such magnificent creatures, Sara. Once I had the opportunity to hand feed one. So gently, it lapped up the food from my hand. Great description in this double haiku, Sara! Love, Carolyn

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/7/2009 6:11:00 PM

wouldn't want to upset a Giraffe! lol! "reticulated brown" great line! Sara! jim