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Gingerly - Not Ginger

GINGERLY?  -  NOT GINGER!

Ginger used an array of colourful drugs,
And owed money to many cruel thugs,

She was a beautiful fresh fifeteen year old,
When her sad story began to unfold!

Ginger was at a party and got very drunk
Police raided it ,arrested the responsible punk!

By twenty she had become hooked 
And arrested several times and booked!

During her short life, she had to often steal,
If she wanted to have the occasional meal!

She lived under a bridge at the bottom of town,
Lay on cardboard, covered by a ragged gown.

Filthy gangsters, relentless in their chase, 
Kicked, beat, abused her and cut her face,

No matter her age all they wanted was money,
You got no money, then bang, bang honey!

Told you girl, no money, you owe, you die
You have made us angry now, don’t dare to cry!

Ginger had spirit, was desperate and bold, 
The drug dealers were tired, sluggish and old!

She had had enough, made a quick dart and bolt 
Knocked one out, but second one gave her a clout!

Ginger quite dazed and bewildered, ran into the street, 
Where she got lost, as she mingled with many feet!

She made herself a promise that never again,
Would she touch drugs, they brought much pain.  

A kind young man noticed and helped her escape,
Threw round her naked, fragile body a drape.

At her twenty first party, the following year, 
She got engaged to this young man, so dear 

She never again looked or took any drugs,
Said farewell to her sad life, and detestable thugs!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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March 28, 2019 at 9:00 PM
Great writing xx
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March 30, 2019 at 12:36 PM
Thank-you so much for your comment Roger. Sorry for the late reply, I have only just noticed this reply. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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January 17, 2019 at 12:28 PM
Hello Jennifer, Ginger has turned her life around , I am glad for that. have a nice day my friend.
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January 17, 2019 at 12:37 PM
Hi Darlene, Lovely to have you visit my page. Yes, fortunately there are some success stories - thank-you God. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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January 8, 2019 at 3:12 AM
Drugs have become rife in our country and its sad to see so many youngsters addicted to this evil. Well written and glad the 15 year old changed her ways. Kim
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January 8, 2019 at 7:57 AM
Hi Kim, Yes I wanted that for her! Not many youngsters get a poetry chance! Wishes and light, Jennifer.
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January 5, 2019 at 9:05 AM
From a tight corner full of rocky obstacles to a chilling serenity of rest and comfort.. This is how life is sometimes... I stumbled on this because I have been writing couplets myself these few weeks and I think it will continue till the coming months... Great write here... Happy new year
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January 5, 2019 at 9:56 AM
Hi Funom, Nice surprise thanks for the visit and a wonderful 2019 to you and your family. glad you enjoyed my poem and best of luck with the couplets you plan, you are a great poet so sure they will be a tremendous success. Poetry wishes, Jennifer.
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January 5, 2019 at 6:36 AM
Powerful poem describing what many go through, but sadly most never get any help.. Good that your poem ended on a positive note..
Proxenos Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 7:27 AM
I felt like helping a fifteen year old - too sad to see her ruined! The problem is greed which is getting more and more aggressive in our world of crime and drugs - they are targeting youngsters as young as 10 - what a tragedy! Thanks S.O. Poetry wishes, Jennifer.
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January 3, 2019 at 6:56 PM
Clever title, but recovery from addiction seldom succeeds. What loving mother would give her child a glass of water containing 17-teaspoons of sugar? Yet people around the world are rotting away from over-consumption of sugar-water drinks; they know it, but just can't give it up! Recovering usually consists of substituting one risk for another risk, so isn't it great you can write an happy ending? Aloha! Rico
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January 4, 2019 at 5:03 AM
Hi Rico, I am a happy ever after freak, unless i hear, read or see to the contrary. Ginger needed help she was only fifteen. i noticed from a comment something about Hawaii, fascinated by this country, do you perhaps live there? Yasou, Poetry wishes, Jennifer.
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January 3, 2019 at 1:53 AM
It was so nice that this intriguing story had a happy ending. My dear friend rescued a pregnant girl like this, married her and became the childs father. Then they had one of their own. It is possible to turn your life around if you have the will to try. A creative and inspiring poem Jennifer. Brava! Happy New Year! : ) xxoo
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January 3, 2019 at 4:43 AM
Your friend did a very noble thing Connie and was the rewarded in the best way possible . That is what i think also, we are all created with a free will, not an inflexible one! Once again an amazing comment. Poetry wishes, Jennifer.
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January 2, 2019 at 11:08 PM
This was both painfully sad and beautifully hopeful... a valuable and important piece.
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January 3, 2019 at 12:30 AM
Thank-you P.S. We can only hope that there will be more like Ginger! Thank-you for your comment, always a great pleasure to have you visit. Love and hugs, Jennifer
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January 2, 2019 at 5:04 PM
A poem about the other side of life, and one that needs to be told, and told again...the poetry is wonderful yet sad, truly writing such as this, is on a mission..
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January 3, 2019 at 12:34 AM
Thank you Harry, some of you comments would be good to consider writing as a poem. Happy it had the desired effect! Best wishes an poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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January 2, 2019 at 4:08 PM
Her drug abuse led her down a violent path..Glad the story had a happy ending...Happy New Year to you and yours Jennifer..
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January 3, 2019 at 12:42 AM
Thanks for visiting Joseph, drugs unfortunately can only lead to bitter tears and great strife. Happy you liked the ending, thought she deserved it! Thanks for the wishes back to you and yours tenfold! Poetry wishes, Jennifer.
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January 2, 2019 at 1:53 PM
Amazing story--amazing poem, Jennifer! Janice
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January 3, 2019 at 12:45 AM
Thanks Janice means a lot that you thought this! Drugs are infiltrating our society enticing younger and younger people daily. Poetry wishes, Jennifer.
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January 2, 2019 at 12:56 PM
I was very engaged in this story and loved the ending to it . Nicely rhymed tale of redemption, Jennifer.
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January 3, 2019 at 12:54 AM
Yes we do take a breathe of relief after reaching the ending of our poems as we hold the characters destiny in our hands! Thank you for your lovely comment Andrea, poetry wishes, Jennifer
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January 2, 2019 at 8:01 AM
i like the redeeming value of this beautiful piece... may we be aware that some habits are dangerous to life, jen... huggs
Proxenos Avatar
January 2, 2019 at 11:02 AM
Hi Nette, and people so easily get embroiled in nasty circumstances! Which part of or cosmos do you live in Nette? Love and hugs, Jen.
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January 2, 2019 at 3:26 AM
addiction of any sort can lead to such terrible consequences, drink and drugs cause so many issues and can lead to someone losing everything including their lives. Powerfully penned story Jenifer so glad it had a happy ending:-) happy new year:-) hugs Jan xx
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January 2, 2019 at 10:58 AM
Hi Jan, One of my husband's nephew's was horribly hooked and has disappeared off planet earths radar. His parents are drug addicts also, so no support anywhere - very sad case. Ginger was determined and lucky! Hugs an love, Jennifer.
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January 2, 2019 at 2:55 AM
When you get on that road it's a downward spiral and not many escape, but occasionly some do like your verse. Help is there but you cant force it on them, they have to ask. Well written Jennifer. Tom.
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January 2, 2019 at 10:36 AM
Quite so Tom and the younger the become addicted the worse it is! If parents or loved ones interfere, they can have worsen it, but often Thank God age can mellow the addiction . Best wisHes and hugs, Jennifer
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