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Tania's Sunrise/Sunset Color Contest ~ August 19, 2025

morn's gilded sunrise 
yawns in cerulean skies ~
gleaming o'er the sea

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Frederic Parker

Date: 8/21/2025 6:54:00 AM

having sailed the seas I can tell you mornings and evenings were spectacular!

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/20/2025 9:53:00 PM

Lovely haiku. I enjoy the description.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/21/2025 2:56:00 AM

Thank you very much, Hilda.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/20/2025 10:39:00 AM

Lin, thanks for taking me on a brief vacation cruise. This is really all it takes. You can really make me smile. Thanks for being part of the good side of the site!!!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/21/2025 2:56:00 AM

I loved every word of your comment, Duke. Your excursion fee is on its way. Still smillng?

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 8/19/2025 2:59:00 PM

Dear Lin, ugh, it’s so graceful and dreamy. I felt like I was standing at the edge of the sea, watching the day stretch awake. Lin, you’ve got such a delicate touch with language, like you paint with light. Blessings, My Dear Lin, Daniel

Lin Lane
Date: 8/21/2025 2:55:00 AM

I felt the same way when I found this photo to go with what I'd written. Thank you for the sweet compliments, Daniel.

John Lawless

Date: 8/19/2025 12:06:00 PM

nicely done Lin, you make the sun blush

Lin Lane
Date: 8/19/2025 1:36:00 PM

Thank you for such tepid comments, John. ;-) I think I blushed.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2025 5:29:00 AM

- Lovely written, Lin - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 8/19/2025 6:31:00 AM

Thanks, an awful lot for your thoughts, Anne-Lise. hugs