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Tania's Sunrise/Sunset Color Contest ~ August 19, 2025

gilded sunrise

morn's gilded sunrise 
yawns in cerulean skies ~
gleaming o'er the sea

sunhaiku

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

September 1, 2025 at 11:01 PM

Congratulations on your beautiful p.o.t.d, have a nice day ~ AA

Lin Lane

September 2, 2025 at 1:11 AM

Thanks but it’s not potd.

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 1, 2025 at 11:48 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely sunrise, Lin :) - hugs

Lin Lane

September 2, 2025 at 1:11 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Andrea Dietrich

September 1, 2025 at 11:00 AM

The yawn line is so cool. Congratulations on your top win

Lin Lane

September 1, 2025 at 11:08 AM

;-) thanks. Andrea.

Terry Miller

September 1, 2025 at 1:02 AM

Beautiful, congratulations

Lin Lane

September 1, 2025 at 11:07 AM

Thanks very much, Terry.

Kim Rodrigues

August 31, 2025 at 2:27 PM

A pretty picture of the sunrise! Congratulations!

Lin Lane

August 31, 2025 at 3:46 PM

Thank you, Kim.

Paula Goldsmith

August 31, 2025 at 9:46 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "gilded sunrise" Haiku write. I love the sea and this Great Picture... Have a blessed day with your win.........

Lin Lane

August 31, 2025 at 3:46 PM

Thank you so much, Paula.

Tania Kitchin

August 31, 2025 at 7:07 AM

Lin, congratulations on your first place win with your gorgeous haiku.

Lin Lane

August 31, 2025 at 3:45 PM

Thank you, Tania. I appreciate your time and contests.

Suzanne Delaney

August 22, 2025 at 3:17 PM

Lin: Love your fun sunrise description of day awakening. Each day is different in its own beautiful way.

Lin Lane

August 31, 2025 at 3:44 PM

It really is and thank you, Suzanne.

Deb M

August 22, 2025 at 5:44 AM

You paint such a beautiful picture with your lovely words Lin! Debx

Lin Lane

August 31, 2025 at 3:43 PM

Thank you, Deb.

Frederic Parker

August 21, 2025 at 6:54 AM

having sailed the seas I can tell you mornings and evenings were spectacular!

Lin Lane

August 31, 2025 at 3:43 PM

Thanks a lot.

Hilda Greenhough

August 20, 2025 at 9:53 PM

Lovely haiku. I enjoy the description.

Lin Lane

August 21, 2025 at 2:56 AM

Thank you very much, Hilda.

Duke Beaufort

August 20, 2025 at 10:39 AM

Lin, thanks for taking me on a brief vacation cruise. This is really all it takes. You can really make me smile. Thanks for being part of the good side of the site!!!

Lin Lane

August 21, 2025 at 2:56 AM

I loved every word of your comment, Duke. Your excursion fee is on its way. Still smillng?

Daniel Henry Rodgers

August 19, 2025 at 2:59 PM

Dear Lin, ugh, it’s so graceful and dreamy. I felt like I was standing at the edge of the sea, watching the day stretch awake. Lin, you’ve got such a delicate touch with language, like you paint with light. Blessings, My Dear Lin, Daniel

Lin Lane

August 21, 2025 at 2:55 AM

I felt the same way when I found this photo to go with what I'd written. Thank you for the sweet compliments, Daniel.