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Tania's Sunrise/Sunset Color Contest ~ August 19, 2025

gilded sunrise

morn's gilded sunrise 
yawns in cerulean skies ~
gleaming o'er the sea

sunhaiku

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/1/2025 11:48:00 AM

- Congratulations on your lovely sunrise, Lin :) - hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 9/2/2025 1:11:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2025 11:00:00 AM

The yawn line is so cool. Congratulations on your top win

Lin Lane
Date: 9/1/2025 11:08:00 AM

;-) thanks. Andrea.

Terry Miller

Date: 9/1/2025 1:02:00 AM

Beautiful, congratulations

Lin Lane
Date: 9/1/2025 11:07:00 AM

Thanks very much, Terry.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/31/2025 2:27:00 PM

A pretty picture of the sunrise! Congratulations!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/31/2025 3:46:00 PM

Thank you, Kim.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/31/2025 9:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "gilded sunrise" Haiku write. I love the sea and this Great Picture... Have a blessed day with your win.........

Lin Lane
Date: 8/31/2025 3:46:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paula.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 8/31/2025 7:07:00 AM

Lin, congratulations on your first place win with your gorgeous haiku.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/31/2025 3:45:00 PM

Thank you, Tania. I appreciate your time and contests.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 8/22/2025 3:17:00 PM

Lin: Love your fun sunrise description of day awakening. Each day is different in its own beautiful way.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/31/2025 3:44:00 PM

It really is and thank you, Suzanne.

Deb M

Date: 8/22/2025 5:44:00 AM

You paint such a beautiful picture with your lovely words Lin! Debx

Lin Lane
Date: 8/31/2025 3:43:00 PM

Thank you, Deb.

Frederic Parker

Date: 8/21/2025 6:54:00 AM

having sailed the seas I can tell you mornings and evenings were spectacular!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/31/2025 3:43:00 PM

Thanks a lot.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/20/2025 9:53:00 PM

Lovely haiku. I enjoy the description.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/21/2025 2:56:00 AM

Thank you very much, Hilda.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/20/2025 10:39:00 AM

Lin, thanks for taking me on a brief vacation cruise. This is really all it takes. You can really make me smile. Thanks for being part of the good side of the site!!!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/21/2025 2:56:00 AM

I loved every word of your comment, Duke. Your excursion fee is on its way. Still smillng?

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 8/19/2025 2:59:00 PM

Dear Lin, ugh, it’s so graceful and dreamy. I felt like I was standing at the edge of the sea, watching the day stretch awake. Lin, you’ve got such a delicate touch with language, like you paint with light. Blessings, My Dear Lin, Daniel

Lin Lane
Date: 8/21/2025 2:55:00 AM

I felt the same way when I found this photo to go with what I'd written. Thank you for the sweet compliments, Daniel.