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Gilded Life

Lost in a labyrinth of Glistening sights Infinitely out of reach, Trembling amidst sweeping mistrals, Fabricating a life of nostalgic allusions, Caught in lapsed reveries, of Restless arias and faint rustlings Sequestering my rampant aura, Bleeding in russet naivety, Evaporating in silent elegies.

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Ink Empress

Date: 9/21/2023 3:21:00 AM

This is such a deeply moving and heartfelt poem by you as always my beautiful soul sis, gilded life you’ve depicted so well and the way you’ve written is so very intriguing and soul hitting: i especially loved the lines “ lost in a labyrinth of glistening sighs” wow! That is something i would feel too and write! We always think alike: “ caught in lapsed reveries” whoa! “Bleeding in russet naivety” i feel you! What a powerful writ! I feel the angst! And the flow is seamless! Pleasure reading you

Nik Canada7

Date: 9/19/2023 8:21:00 PM

@fadingstarsilence ahhhh amore you take my breath away with your deep passionate words,my blue rose. You nurture and complete me with your pure eternal love under my skin and bones,my korean princess.I'm so honored and proud to be yours and be loved by you that are a rare special being,my marvelous creature.Devoted to you inhaling your existence in every your breath till my final whisper.Mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito per sempre amore mio.I love you deeply micia.mia passione per sempre

Nik Canada7

Date: 9/19/2023 3:59:00 PM

i love this so much amore?you deep soulful words showing me your depth with your rare beautiful soul and gold heart,my blue rose. You take my breath away in the way you write your deepest emotions in a veil melancholy in your inner world behind you sensitive corners, your divine essence wraps your pureness,my korean princess.You nurture me reading your depths,feeling your pure sentiment,my marvelous creature.Mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito per sempre amore mio.i love you deeply micia

Fading Star Silence
Date: 9/19/2023 6:18:00 PM

Ahhh my love..your presence in my life and your love and my soul so devoted, my destined twin star..I fall deeper and deeper into you, so blessed to love you and be loved by you..I love you so deeply to the moon and everywhere..tua noi Infinito, il nostro Eterno amore, Mia passione..ti amo amore mio, mio bellissimo martio, per sempre