James Peranteau Poet Free verse

Giggles and Goose Bumps

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                  Unexpectedly 
              his miniature hand
                 bathed my arm

                  Attached to it
                     the query

                       “Pops”

                     “Yes son
                 I love you too”

          And his giggles raced on

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Kabuteng P.Ink K. November 9, 2011 at 12:44 PM AWW shucks, James!! that is just the sweetest thing! the love definitely emanates from this very sweet and touching write! You & Noah are both so blessed!! ^_^ Super smiling right now.... :) this is such a bright way for me to log off here :D

Nancy Jones October 11, 2011 at 12:33 PM oooh, i love this! just the one i needed this mo. Thanks!~N

Kyle Kriticos October 8, 2011 at 7:00 AM Another great write James, love to see you adding more and more ! Good job!

Carolyn Devonshire October 1, 2011 at 3:50 AM And this just made your day even more perfect, didn't it, James? Such a sweet poem for Noah! Love to both of you, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 29, 2011 at 7:21 PM such a sweet scene of Father and Son James.. treasure these moments ..they end all too fast my friend.. great title.. it has been way too long since we communicated luv... hope all is well and u both are happy in blessings..

Joe Maverick September 29, 2011 at 3:45 PM A lovley and uncomplicated offering James, pleased to read this today..

Phyllis Babcock September 29, 2011 at 11:57 AM It does give you goose bumps and I love the giggles of children. Love is grand. Have a nice weekend both of you. love phyl

Wilma Neels September 25, 2011 at 11:36 AM This is too cute, cherish these moments James and give Noah a hug from me ;) love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich September 22, 2011 at 12:54 AM He sounds like a real sweetheart, James!

Jack Ross Jr. September 21, 2011 at 3:36 PM Wonderful write about your son sir James, enjoyed it much....with love...old Jack

Elizabeth Wesley September 19, 2011 at 10:59 PM Those little guys sure know how to wrap themselves around the finger. I can see his little face looking at you.

Daver Austin September 19, 2011 at 5:27 PM Hey, Pops! Good one. Sounds like your son is at that very cute stage of childhood. Love, daver

Poet Destroyer A September 19, 2011 at 5:12 PM how sweet p.d.

Chiquitachiamaka Baity September 19, 2011 at 3:21 PM Very creative James... thanks for sharing

Sara Kendrick September 19, 2011 at 2:53 PM Enjoyed reading your work..That is a great feeling that I know that you will cherish..Sara