Giggles and Goose Bumps

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                  Unexpectedly 
              his miniature hand
                 bathed my arm

                  Attached to it
                     the query

                       “Pops”

                     “Yes son
                 I love you too”

          And his giggles raced on

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/9/2011 12:44:00 PM
AWW shucks, James!! that is just the sweetest thing! the love definitely emanates from this very sweet and touching write! You & Noah are both so blessed!! ^_^ Super smiling right now.... :) this is such a bright way for me to log off here :D
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Date: 10/11/2011 12:33:00 PM
oooh, i love this! just the one i needed this mo. Thanks!~N
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Date: 10/8/2011 7:00:00 AM
Another great write James, love to see you adding more and more ! Good job!
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Date: 10/1/2011 3:50:00 AM
And this just made your day even more perfect, didn't it, James? Such a sweet poem for Noah! Love to both of you, Carolyn
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Date: 9/29/2011 7:21:00 PM
such a sweet scene of Father and Son James.. treasure these moments ..they end all too fast my friend.. great title.. it has been way too long since we communicated luv... hope all is well and u both are happy in blessings..
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Date: 9/29/2011 3:45:00 PM
A lovley and uncomplicated offering James, pleased to read this today..
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Date: 9/29/2011 11:57:00 AM
It does give you goose bumps and I love the giggles of children. Love is grand. Have a nice weekend both of you. love phyl
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Date: 9/25/2011 11:36:00 AM
This is too cute, cherish these moments James and give Noah a hug from me ;) love Wilma
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Date: 9/22/2011 12:54:00 AM
He sounds like a real sweetheart, James!
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Date: 9/21/2011 3:36:00 PM
Wonderful write about your son sir James, enjoyed it much....with love...old Jack
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Date: 9/19/2011 10:59:00 PM
Those little guys sure know how to wrap themselves around the finger. I can see his little face looking at you.
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Date: 9/19/2011 5:27:00 PM
Hey, Pops! Good one. Sounds like your son is at that very cute stage of childhood. Love, daver
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Date: 9/19/2011 5:12:00 PM
how sweet p.d.
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Date: 9/19/2011 3:21:00 PM
Very creative James... thanks for sharing
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Date: 9/19/2011 2:53:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..That is a great feeling that I know that you will cherish..Sara
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