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Giggle

i think sometimes 
of the thoughts you have 
and i think i know how you think 
somewhere in there 
you think like i do 
and even you 
have to admit 
not much in time has passed 
two elbows next together on a swing 

  heads forward and with each other  

  tilted back in a laugh  

  heels scraping sand on the way back  

adult old and all that 

  then 

the chin comes in  

  for another push below the knees  

Puh-lease 
as if we never got that 
thank god the sky's got enough blue 
to catch me & you 
in the swivel of a giggle 
a back and forth 
no one else knew 
chains and wood for a seat 
under the sound that comes before a laugh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/11/2010 6:38:00 AM
that's really good. i mean, i've been told that i'm a good writer too and that i show a talent for it, but that is by far, better.
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Date: 6/10/2010 10:58:00 PM
very cute poem..lved it...love nikki
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