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Gigantic Moon

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Calm, tropical moon was huge, filling the night skies with sheen; And seemed to touch green treetops, and wild, songbird scenes. The moon grazed mountains and jade hills, when I lay dreaming, In the warm fragrance of midnight, with dim, starlight streaming. Full moon was in Daylily Meadow, with a dark, mysterious breeze, And its loveliness nearly touched the ground, in the hours of ease. All the obsidian night was aglow, with the nebulous, magical light, For even when none are observing, nature offers charming sights. Written on 3/23/2023 For: STRAND NO 1203 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/29/2023 9:57:00 AM

Your "Gigantic Moon" is a wonderful rhyme write. Have a blessed day...............

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/29/2023 10:07:00 AM

Thank you for your gladdening comments. Kindest regards.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/29/2023 12:55:00 AM

Excellent, Evelyn, nothing can beat the charm of moonlight streaming in:)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/29/2023 10:04:00 AM

You have my very deep thanks, Jo. :)

Komal Walimbe

Date: 3/28/2023 3:00:00 AM

Ha! Beautifully written...so imagery! Wish you luck :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/28/2023 11:00:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind thoughts and well wishes. :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/27/2023 11:19:00 AM

So picturesque, Evelyn, especially 'in the warm fragrance of midnight' and 'its loveliness nearly touched the ground' - just as inspiring as the full moon in her glory, hope it does well in the contest for you~

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/27/2023 11:32:00 AM

Thank you so much for the pleasure of your lovely comments, Michelle.

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/26/2023 12:40:00 PM

Hi Evelyn, You penned such a beautiful entry for the contest. Good imagery and content. I enjoyed the picture you painted with words .Best wishes in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/26/2023 9:09:00 PM

Your gracious comments are such a delight, Alexis. Thank you very much. I hope your week is very nice. :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 3/25/2023 8:28:00 PM

beautiful and descriptive, the moon is a good friend to talk have a nice .sunday Evelyn yann

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/26/2023 12:25:00 PM

Thank you so much, Yann. :)