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the gift of flower baskets Mother remembers giving to neighbors and nature's present to me swallows have returned this day

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Date: 5/1/2024 8:20:00 PM
Nature is very generous. I'd live to see those swallow. Your poem is perky just like the start of May.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 5/1/2024 9:18:00 PM
Thank you. I love it when the swallows return. It makes me feel like it really is Spring.
Date: 5/1/2024 7:59:00 PM
Interesting... I had never heard of Mayday flowers, and well, here they are. I remember the Maypole Dance... In any event, Happy May Day, Chetta. :) gw
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Date: 5/1/2024 8:07:00 PM
Yes. Mom, who is 89 now, remembers in school on May Day the students would go out and hang baskets of flowers on neighborhood doors. I also had to make a correction to this poem. I wrote sparrows when I meant swallows.

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