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Crackling, crunchy leaves confetti the ground as skeleton trees rattle their bare bones. And gusty winds howl like a soulful hound while kids mope indoors, glued to their cellphones. Indistinguishable, they look like clones and seem as enthusiastic as stones. Winter's approach gets labeled a bad thing, covering everything in snow and ice. And migrating songbirds no longer sing, they've left before Winter exacts Her price. But changing seasons is like adding spice, just think of a snowflake as something nice. All the mosquitos have frozen to death, and life gets swathed in a snowy duvet. Winter entices with a frosty breath, enjoy Her; don't think of Her as a threat. Indulge in all the Winter you can get, there is more to life than the internet. Spring, Summer, Autumn, and Winter are real gifts of Nature, designed to make us feel. (Urban Sonnet) 10/20/2018

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Date: 4/19/2019 2:57:00 PM
Very nice, Emily. One chapter of my book: 'Points in Between' (birth and death)to be in print by July, contains a chapter on gifts of nature. Look for it on at Friesen Publishing, Amazon, Kobo and others.
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Date: 4/19/2019 4:51:00 PM
Thanks Mel, your support is most appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/20/2018 11:53:00 PM
Great write, Emile. I like the way you've laced a mostly poetic, old world style of expression with a few well timed 21st Century references. A good point very well conveyed.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/21/2018 6:29:00 PM
Thanks Lawrence, as always your support is most appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/20/2018 9:44:00 PM
There is more to life than the internet. WHAT? You must be kidding. What a great urban sonnet! You always amaze me, my poet-writer-friend. Love your rhymes and your images.
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Date: 10/21/2018 6:29:00 PM
Thanks Caren, as always your support is most appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/20/2018 8:34:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Emile.
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Date: 10/20/2018 9:15:00 PM
Thanks Line, as always your support is most appreciated my friend, Emile
Date: 10/20/2018 7:02:00 PM
This is nice Emile, I am so enjoying your book of poetry, I open to it sporadically and read a few every night. Thank yo for your generosity.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/20/2018 9:15:00 PM
Thank you Pixie, I wrote my book for people like you, who appreciate and enjoy my poetry, It pleases me to hear that you enjoy reading it my friend, Emile.
Date: 10/20/2018 5:12:00 PM
Very nice Emile. I enjoyed this a lot :) and a favorite.
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Date: 10/20/2018 5:56:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, your friendly comments always cheer me up my friend, Emile.

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