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Gifts given by the sun

You have gifts given by the sun They shine through; to you, I run Every eight-ball I've been behind says, "You are the one!" I think maybe my mind speaks to often, what's the word? Overmuch? From your sunbeams, I've spaced out a little too much So I'll talk a lot less and give you a little more intentional touch The feels I have felt cannot be undone, I am alive because of these interactions, 'cause you are my person!

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Date: 8/27/2024 12:56:00 PM
I agree with Karen. This is a sweet poem, enjoyed reading it <3
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Date: 8/27/2024 5:21:00 PM
Thank you Paige! Writing about eyes has always given me comfort :) Regards A.S.
Date: 8/26/2024 11:35:00 PM
Aw this is sweet
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Date: 8/27/2024 5:36:00 AM
Brown eyes, I have a total weakness for them :)

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