Gifts given by the sun

You have gifts given by the sun
They shine through; to you, I run
Every eight-ball I've been behind says, "You are the one!"
I think maybe my mind speaks to often, what's the word? Overmuch?
From your sunbeams, I've spaced out a little too much
So I'll talk a lot less and give you a little more intentional touch
The feels I have felt cannot be undone, I am alive because of these interactions, 'cause you are my person!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Hind Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 12:56 PM
I agree with Karen. This is a sweet poem, enjoyed reading it <3
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August 27, 2024 at 5:21 PM
Thank you Paige! Writing about eyes has always given me comfort :) Regards A.S.
Jones Avatar
August 26, 2024 at 11:35 PM
Aw this is sweet
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August 27, 2024 at 5:36 AM
Brown eyes, I have a total weakness for them :)
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