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On the edge of soft twilight Before all else greet morn's dew... I wrap you 'round my bosom And allow this gift of hours To savor love-coos, just mine; Drinking deeply your fresh songs A pleasure newborn babe grants. * Constance La France's Contest HM's and NA's October 2020 Poetry Submitted 11/2/2020 Written 10/29/2020 Judged 11/1/2020 For 49ER Contest ~ N/A ~edited syl count via how manysyllabes

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Date: 3/28/2023 11:52:00 PM
Hi Nette, great observation and Reflection here ' hope you are Doing ok ?
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Date: 7/13/2021 1:16:00 PM
A "Wonderful" write and picture. A new baby from God. Have a blessed day...............
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Date: 10/30/2020 11:41:00 AM
A beautiful scene youve created Nette. Hope you're well Tom
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Date: 10/30/2020 10:01:00 AM
This is lovely and something I've experienced twice...
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Date: 10/30/2020 6:00:00 AM
Beautiful coos in this loving scene--wonderful write, Nette.
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