Cory Long Poet Rhyme

Gift of Love

I was told that life means to love extensively.
wondering what it's like to love something so much?
 feeling  the  power love holds deep. 
Seeing the beautiful things love perceives.
Love can break a heart.
Love can mend a heart in an instant.
Love can make you cry for different reasons, 
Some cry because they are happy.
Others cry when there world has falling apart.
The feelings that come with love,
can be a scary thing to accept.
The intensity of emotions your body feels,
can be overwhelming. 
If your not use to the beauty love presents,
Don't run from your feelings embrace them instead.
Accept the gift of love that is being giving to you.
Some say you need love to live!
Others say no you don't!
If you open your heart  enough
You will feel the gift of love as well.

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Gary Fields June 8, 2011 at 5:57 PM Love is instance, love is a tool! When ye embark upon love, just make sure that it is true and make the best of the reasons' why. It is a self ful-fill gift of nature. So be more contrite and think about it tonight. Embrace fore it a personal, self-sustaining emotion. Good write up. Keep up, the write up! Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS

Gary Fields June 8, 2011 at 5:56 PM Love is instance, love is a tool! When ye embark upon love, just make sure that it is true and make the best of the reasons' why. It is a self ful-fill gift of nature. So be more contrite and think about it tonight. Embrace fore it a personal, self-sustaining emotion. Good write up. Keep up, the write up! Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS Gary Fields June 8, 2011 at 6:00 PM just had to repeat myself......... So rethink it again and again

Carolyn Devonshire May 18, 2011 at 10:12 AM Love certainly creates powerful emotions -- some welcome and some not. But I would choose not to live in a world without love. So many types of love, Cory. The love from friends and family carries me through the tough times. Beautifully written, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Don Johnson May 18, 2011 at 4:39 AM Deep stuff Cory of this love thing... sleepless nights till morning kissed... disturbing for this dingaling... short of loving surely missed... xo Don

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 17, 2011 at 8:47 PM cory this one is a masterpiece of expression my friend.. u seem to have captured the entire essence of luv in your lines .. all the doors it opens and closes luv.. thankxx for allowing me to read this rare beauty .. special piece...

Brandy Uptain May 17, 2011 at 7:46 PM very good poem. if you havent found some special i hope you do

Dr.Ram Mehta May 17, 2011 at 12:57 PM Nice analytical expressions on the gift of love, a rare gift a human has, cory

Carol Eastman May 17, 2011 at 12:34 PM So very well said. Bravo!

Sara Kendrick May 17, 2011 at 7:37 AM Enjoyed reading your work this morning..Loving and receiving love is a wonderful part of life..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Mourning Mist May 17, 2011 at 6:06 AM let me know if you plan on baking up any..to distribute out...lol..and if it will harm anyone to eat them? hmm as long as no one gets hurt by scarfing them all down what does it matter right? permissable?

Mourning Mist May 17, 2011 at 6:04 AM what can it hurt to eat many cookies right? dozens and dozens of cookies...what harm could ever do?

Mourning Mist May 17, 2011 at 6:03 AM feel like a cookie? do you have permission to eat many cookies? LOL

Mourning Mist May 17, 2011 at 6:02 AM good to see you are doing your upmost to avoid the j day! not on the 21st of this month either ROFL

Mourning Mist May 17, 2011 at 6:01 AM thanks for the comment..yeah this is much better to write about then endorsing a man who beat women to the point of hospitalization, when you endorse those types you remain here..for the big J day! along with comments of permission for adultery, cheating and breaking hearts of many! I prefer your writing over that sort any day

Mourning Mist May 17, 2011 at 5:43 AM i have never had love break my heart to be honest, the only time I had my heart broken is from adultery and being lead on...never by being loved...I remember hearing about an x of mine using the same lines and nickname...that is not love that is a form of emotional abuse and wounds the heart