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Gibraltar Crumbling

Oh, I loved her then I placed her on high Far above mortals Where the air was thin She handled it well As the years passed Love was still true A stranger came With ill intent Then she stopped Loving me I could see And my Whole world Fell 12-9-19 Contest: Pick A Title, Vol 12 - Diminished Hexaverse Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 1/12/2020 1:44:00 PM
wow, lost love you put into yours. Love that, Larry. Congrats for the win.
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Date: 1/11/2020 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this well-written, moving write, Larry:-)
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Date: 12/9/2019 11:56:00 PM
Larry, poignant and sorrowful.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 12/10/2019 12:05:00 AM
Thank you, Caren!