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June 25, 2023

Writing Challenge G Words Contest sponsored by Constance La France

"Maybe all the people who say ghosts don't exist are just afraid to admit they do."

           ~ Michael Ende

I shudder at the thought of each day giving way to night for I know they will arrive garbed in thin veils of white Through windows ghosts fly, though they're closed tight Moaning my name until I think I might die from fright I have done nothing to them, so why can't I escape when I feel their foul breath on the flesh of my nape? They ride on the wind, exposing their ghoulish shape I'll stare at those scowling faces with my mouth agape I've screamed and I've hit but they laugh at my fear With evil eyes they taunt me as they glower and leer The wind's begun to howl, and still, they hover near I tremble in bed when their intent becomes quite clear I hear them whispering vile words in a concocted spell But the words they're chanting, I cannot hear very well These ghosts haunt me each night from where they dwell, Out of the darkness they swarm from the fires of Hell Tonight, I'll be brave when they come from the fiery deep I will stand before them, my tears I will dare not weep and chase the wraiths from my home, each ghostly creep I hope they will fade away so that I might peacefully sleep

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Date: 6/30/2023 10:56:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I enjoyed reading it again. Still no ghosts for me. Have a blessed day/weekend....................
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Date: 6/30/2023 1:15:00 AM
oh gosh Lin, I am so late in reading this so sorry I missed it but i wasnt well at the beginning of the week- glad its morning or I may not have slept if I read it late at night! many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/28/2023 12:42:00 PM
Yikes! I am happy to read from your comments that this is fictional. I know people say there is no such thing as ghosts, but Jesus didn't say it, when He walked on water to them and they thought He was one, He assured them that He wasn't...but didn't call them silly. When He appeared to them after He rose from the dead, He showed them that He was in the flesh, not a ghost (Luke 24:59). I pray when I get scared by creepiness, in the name of Jesus! Scary poem, gave me chills. I'm glad its fiction!
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Date: 6/28/2023 12:53:00 PM
Ghosts, demons… whatever they’re called are scary. I say, Get behind me, Satan. It gives me courage. Thanks for reading me and leaving your thoughts, BJ.
Date: 6/25/2023 10:26:00 AM
A creative write/picture. No ghosts for me. Good Luck if it is for the G contest. I also did this one with God. Have a great day/week............
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Date: 6/25/2023 1:39:00 PM
Thank you, Paula.
Date: 6/25/2023 9:30:00 AM
Such vivid imagery, Lin! I enjoyed reading your ghostly write! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 6/25/2023 9:32:00 AM
Hi Kim and thanks. Thank goodness these lines are fictional. Have a great Sunday.
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