Ghostly Sentinels

I sat upon a weathered rock

And looked across the fells,

Emerging from the morning cloud

Like ghostly sentinels.

The rising sun revealing all

In perfect clarity,

A wonderland of serried peaks

Appeared in front of me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Pandit Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 7:24 AM
Lovely imagery depicted with such beautiful lines--well written, Gary!
Smith Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 8:00 AM
Thank you Vijay :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 5:54 PM
So beautiful!
Smith Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 5:57 PM
Thank you Kim :)
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