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unrhymed quatrains 

All one will ever need is you everlasting loyalty where a thousand teardrops are sourced glistening gems from the fountain they shall fall with the grace adorned beauty held within That of a single tune striking cords deeply Kissed by the oceans is the salt contained In wild seas it's there phantoms of the past nightshades driven by ghosts is the tides turning current Crashing waves hurled by the breath exhaled tempest of the storm you carry away footprints where all that remains is the shell of your being bleached through the sands of time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/28/2018 7:03:00 PM
Liam, “crashing waves hurled by the breath exhaled” your ink was the tempest carried away in excellence...:-) Have a blessed week!
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Date: 1/28/2018 1:43:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow! This is a very beautiful, outstanding and powerful poem that you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned.Very heartfelt! I enjoyed it!Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen. Just awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!Please,take very good care of yourself !To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 1/28/2018 11:15:00 AM
Hello Liam Mate!! A Ghostly Mirage this one is for sure, as finely crafted and represented so well by the words and exquisite imagery of your Quatrain write!! Enjoyed this one immensely!! A FAVE it is!! It's time for a nip of good ole' Irish Dew now!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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