Ghost Town Sunrise

The night was so cold the wait was too long 
Winds pierced my dead body with a blues song, 
now echoing thoughts up and down my spine, 
of our time when your touch was all just mine. 

My eyes were sore and closed from lonely life 
Pain memories of a goodbye ran rife
Shadows drew edged pictures of me in pain,
filling empty rooms, leaving a black stain.

Then one sunrise light came back to her home 
Her smile lit my fire I was not alone 	
The light brought colour and her warm embrace 
I realized it was never a race
	
This sunrise brought the hope that she will stay, 
bringing sunshine, for more than just one day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Eastman Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 11:15 AM
You have a way with sonnets and flowing write leading to a great ending.
James Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 10:51 AM
Thanks Carol and thanks for the visit
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February 28, 2016 at 5:09 PM
A wonderful sonnet....Linda
James Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 12:34 AM
I'm glad if you could resonate with the imagery. Only people who have felt a break in n relationship will see the deeper meanings...
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