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Ghost Orchid

Her beauty blooms the shadows – haunting
           Svelte demure, with fragile veil
        Unseen to those who would possess
Just one lover – nimbus, roars with flashing eyes
     Fervent kisses falling - blushing alabaster
          Druid torrents, sating every curve


                        04 Jun 2020
                     
Note: The ghost orchid (pale white) is one of the rarest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Sambourne Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 7:05 AM
A remarkably sketched tribute to the pale white ochid. Your word choice avoids cliche + soars. Best wishes, Brian
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 9, 2020 at 7:14 PM
Congrats, Dave! I love the sensual imagery...blessings, Rhonda xx
Mishra Avatar
June 8, 2020 at 9:15 AM
"fragile veil","druid torrents"...you weave a sensual poetry with mystic words David. Congratulations on your win :)
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