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unrhymed tercets 

Each night when looking into the night sky 
there faraway it remains always that star sparkling 
Breathless echoes enchanting whispers escape

Back over moonbeams floating within the cradle held 
Inside the mirrored reflections dancing upon waves 
starry eyed pearls colour from the rainbow out love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/23/2018 6:57:00 AM
Late congratulations on your POTD. Almost magical. Enjoyed reading and felt less stressed after. Well done!
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Date: 8/19/2018 5:44:00 PM
Viewing the same star each night is like meeting up with a familiar friend Liam, a comforting thought. This is such a beautifully composed poem. Congratulations on having it honored with POTD! : )
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Date: 8/19/2018 2:54:00 PM
Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 8/19/2018 2:32:00 PM
- A lovely romantic poem, Liam - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/19/2018 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, Liam.. A beautiful and magical poem!! Perfect imagery.. Wonderful!! Blessings!!
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Date: 8/19/2018 9:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Liam. Well done.
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Date: 8/19/2018 6:44:00 AM
Must be our love. Would recognize it anyplace, time or where I swear and always care.
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Date: 8/19/2018 6:43:00 AM
Congrats Liam, on poem of the day..well done!
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Date: 8/19/2018 6:34:00 AM
Hi Liam!:)) Wow!A very huge congratulations on POTD! I'm not surprised at all!An honor so very much well deserved my dearest friend Liam.Just awesome! Well done here as you always do!I'm so very happy for you!:)Wishing you always all the very best in everything and your very dear family too!Enjoy your day!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 8/19/2018 3:46:00 AM
Congrats!!! on your POTD! Liam...your ghostly presence is honored lol...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 8/19/2018 1:23:00 AM
Congratulations my dearest friend, Liam! God bless you for your kind heart!
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Date: 8/18/2018 3:29:00 PM
Lovely Liam...
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Date: 8/18/2018 2:48:00 PM
Hello Liam Mate!! Another marvelous Tercet panoplied with mirror reflections and true poetic delight. Most Excellent!! Cheers, Gary
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Date: 8/18/2018 9:43:00 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!This is the most very beautiful romantic tender sweet n' captivating love poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful heartfelt romantic dreamy heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet! Just wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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