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Ghost

Their love was pure as a gold They were happy and free They thought they will grow old Together in a small house by the sea He loved to hold her so tight To feel her heart close to his He loved to watch her asleep To wake her up with a kiss Disaster struck them one day He was gone like a dream She couldn't bare the pain They always were a team He came to see her once more He missed her so very much He would give anything For her one gentle touch Only tears on her face He could touch the most She didn't know he was there Simply because he was a... Ghost Refrain... Ditto... ditto... ditto to you Ditto...ditto... always love you Please take my heart Please take my soul Ditto...ditto... I love you so ... DITTO

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 10/18/2013 10:12:00 AM

Great movie with two fine performers at their best.

Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 10/18/2013 2:23:00 PM

Agree with you on that... :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/28/2013 6:38:00 PM

I still love that movie, patrick and Demi were so young. I think the term is ditto but I could be wrong. Enjoyed the poem Elizabeth. Take care Rick

Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 8/28/2013 6:52:00 PM

Hello Richard, and thank you for the time you took to read my work. Yes ,this is one of my favorite movie as well, and you were right, ditto is the right term. Thank you... :) Ellie

Elizabeth Jubenville

Date: 12/3/2012 9:39:00 AM

The movie Ghost, was my inspiration, I do appreciate your lovely comments Thank you... Ellie

Lillie Williams

Date: 11/29/2012 9:16:00 PM

WOW! this is very sad. I can't even imagine. This is a great write. I love it!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/27/2012 9:23:00 PM

Elizabeth, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Keep the good verses coming... take care & good night :-) PD

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/13/2012 1:06:00 PM

Elizabeth, welcome to P-Soup - You're good at writing poetry, I like your poem. - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your poems here with us. - (To get comments, you must give back comments) - Looking forward to reading more in the future. - Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 11/13/2012 1:16:00 PM

Hello Anne-Lise, I am new to P-Soup, and thank you so much for such a warm welcome :)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/13/2012 9:56:00 AM

very nice, enjoyed... Michael

Elizabeth Jubenville
Date: 11/13/2012 10:33:00 AM

My first published poem on Poetry Soup, and your first nice review, thank you. :)