Getting There

Yellow line, guiding me home.
No complaints and without a groan.
Pulling me up and down.
No problem and without a sound.
Twisting and turning.
No churning and to be home I am yearning.
Why does this convoluted journey keep reoccurring?


By: Richard J. Long – January 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 25, 2013 at 8:01 AM
Good morning Richard, ,CONGRATULATIONS!!! on having your poem Featured on the soups home page. enjoy your coming week. Always & Forever * LINDA
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August 24, 2013 at 6:18 PM
Rihcard, congratulations, on your featured poem of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~ :-)
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February 6, 2010 at 3:47 PM
Interesting ideas put to a poem. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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February 4, 2010 at 11:41 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Richard. Love, Carol
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February 3, 2010 at 6:23 PM
good one, enjoyed reading today.
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