Gershon Wolf Poet Monorhyme

Getting the Recipe Right

     She kneaded and rolled it past midnight
        precisely added egg-white

     Yet she still didn’t get the recipe right
        ‘til she mixed love in with daylight

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Paula Goldsmith June 26, 2025 at 12:17 PM A creative "Getting the Recipe Right" write. Love is always needed in food and in life. Have a fun day writing away.......... Gershon Wolf June 26, 2025 at 8:10 PM Love is even needed during Thanksgiving dinners with in-laws. lol. ~ gw

Jennifer Proxenos June 26, 2025 at 11:20 AM She changed her mind doing what she did as a chore, to adding the ingredient of love into the recipe and enjoying it. HUGS, Jennifer. Gershon Wolf June 26, 2025 at 8:07 PM Tina Turner sang 'What's Love Got to Do with It?' That had nothing to do with cooking, did it? lol. ~ O. Verse Exed

Kim Rodrigues June 26, 2025 at 7:33 AM It truly is love that makes the recipe just right or the craft or one’s life! Hugs Gershon Wolf June 26, 2025 at 8:06 PM Without love, there's neither warmth nor satisfaction in the food.