Getting Some Air

6-15-13      Getting Some Air
Been too long since you been gone,
I feel the breeze blow between us,
I see emptiness of time gone by,
Up above the chatter,feet free,
Getting some air in the hang time,
Busy rhymes fill my mind,so long.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 18, 2013 at 8:29 PM
simple descriptive, deeply written in few words. Great poem, Ricky. Enjoyable indeed. Check out some of mine, might find some you like. Peace.
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