Getting Older

Waking up, muscles ache.
Maybe it is dormant love 
Seeping out of bones.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Lopez Avatar
September 18, 2009 at 4:19 PM
dormant love .......nice concept....love your short works!
Dvorkis Avatar
August 26, 2009 at 7:44 AM
Beautiful senryu. I'm fascinated that you'd associate physical pain with love. Love the idea of it being dormant inside you wiaiting to be expressed, even if it is painful...thanks for sharing -Yoni
Fraser Avatar
August 15, 2009 at 7:59 AM
Lovely poem Krista>>James
Strand Avatar
August 15, 2009 at 1:01 AM
Indeed keep on walking Krista.Thanks for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
Strand Avatar
August 15, 2009 at 12:33 AM
Krista thanks for your welcome blog comments.Rgds Brian
Freeman Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 4:55 PM
I hear you talking, having some age myself. Moses
Brown Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 11:17 AM
What a day. Some very unbelieveably outstanding writes I am reading today.Thank you for sharing yours with us Krista. Love, Carol
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