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Getting Older

Waking up, muscles ache. Maybe it is dormant love Seeping out of bones.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/18/2009 4:19:00 PM
dormant love .......nice concept....love your short works!
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Date: 8/26/2009 7:44:00 AM
Beautiful senryu. I'm fascinated that you'd associate physical pain with love. Love the idea of it being dormant inside you wiaiting to be expressed, even if it is painful...thanks for sharing -Yoni
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Date: 8/15/2009 7:59:00 AM
Lovely poem Krista>>James
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Date: 8/15/2009 1:01:00 AM
Indeed keep on walking Krista.Thanks for your welcome comments today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/15/2009 12:33:00 AM
Krista thanks for your welcome blog comments.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/14/2009 4:55:00 PM
I hear you talking, having some age myself. Moses
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Date: 8/14/2009 11:17:00 AM
What a day. Some very unbelieveably outstanding writes I am reading today.Thank you for sharing yours with us Krista. Love, Carol
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