Getting It Together

Hate bedewed with youth
power to impair one’s kin,
grace in growing old
a time to regret, lament...
grandson, reflection of time.

© Harry J Horsman 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Harper Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 11:48 AM
Very strong, touching emotion in this winning poem Harry, I am glad grief can fall into reflection. :) Sheri
Brown Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 5:44 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Get it together" contest Harry. Love, Carol
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September 30, 2012 at 4:10 AM
Much wisdom... great poem... Congrats on your win! Terry
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September 29, 2012 at 12:33 AM
Hi Harry once again, congratulations with your wonderful and well deserved win after expression your thoughts for the ~~India Arie - "Get it together" ~ Contest... It was nice hosting this contest for "Hughes, William" from the soup. Take care~ XOX ~PD
Onclaud Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 3:42 AM
bittersweet nostalgia graces this page,harry... the next generations continues our dreams.. so wonderful!..huggs!..:)
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September 2, 2012 at 3:07 AM
good read, I enjoyed it so much and thanks for your comment, it is much appreciated ~ Cindy
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September 1, 2012 at 3:58 PM
The reflection of ourselves in their lives brings back those memories...Enjoyed reading ..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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September 1, 2012 at 2:24 PM
Deep, insightful write, Harry..I love the last line in your introspective Tanka. I hope all is well. Am glad you enjoyed, "Child of Love"...written for my dearest sister who's now with God. Love, Annalise
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September 1, 2012 at 1:17 PM
lovely and heartfelt tanka, my friend
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September 1, 2012 at 12:36 PM
I can see many emotions in this one, Harry. it's a very intense tanka and I enjoyed the read!
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September 1, 2012 at 8:27 AM
Well done young sir, like it and it provokes quite a few thoughts . xx soup
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September 1, 2012 at 8:26 AM
Getting it together indeed, a very nice expressed Tanka. I enjoyed reading it, God bless you. Erich
O'Leary Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 5:23 AM
Very nice Harry, though somewhat sad... Terry
Gasun Avatar
September 1, 2012 at 4:29 AM
I love this and your other recent poems, Harry! Thanks for sharing!
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August 31, 2012 at 3:44 PM
So true Harry - well written. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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