Gettin' Stirred Up!

Gettin' Stirred Up!

 

twisting and turning

from within the soup,

 

as we long to go rightfully

 

yearning and burning

to break free from everything,

 

but once we're truly poured out

we'd only become cold and callused

 

and then, the longing to return is surely sought

 

5-31-09
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freeman Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 7:16 PM
You have a unique stile, James, I like it. Keep writing, and I will read. Sincerely, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 4:20 PM
Interesting write here. Keep writing. Sara
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