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Get Your Feet Wet

She was only eight months old. Came to see the sea. First sight made her eyes wide open ... and ears listening to the roaring sound of the waves. Landed her tiny hesitant feet on the shore. First touch of the sea made her jump in excitement. Heard her giggle. She started playing with the waves. Running to and fro... "catch me if you can". Ecstasy filled the air. life - an unknown sea, get your feet wet my friends or the springs will pass by (C) Anindya Mohan Tagore (Bobby)

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/23/2015 9:15:00 AM

Great thoughts penned..Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 8/24/2015 12:10:00 AM

Thanks a lot for reading & liking my thoughts... Warm regards, Bobby

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 8/21/2015 9:15:00 AM

An enjoyable read, and I like the marriage of the prose and haiku. Thanks for entering this piece into my contest. Enjoy more haibun.

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 8/21/2015 11:08:00 AM

Thank you Scott for liking my write. I have just penned the real experience of my daughter and the reflection of that wonderful experience on my mind. I love to write Haibuns. Thanks for giving us scope to express in this wonderful form of Japanese poetry ... Warm regards, Bobby

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/21/2015 1:55:00 AM

Congrats on wonderful win Anindya with this amazing haibun!

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 8/21/2015 11:00:00 AM

Thanks a lot Dr. Upma A. Sharma for your encouraging words... Warm regards, Bobby

Skat A

Date: 8/20/2015 6:37:00 PM

Anindya, Congratulations on the win. SKAT

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 8/21/2015 12:03:00 AM

Thank you for letting me know about my win. I am very new to Poetry Soup, would you please tell me - how can I know it or where to search it? ... Thanks once again, Bobby

Jan Allison

Date: 8/20/2015 12:04:00 PM

This is charming congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Anindya Mohan Tagore
Date: 8/21/2015 12:05:00 AM

Thanks a lot for your wonderful words and wish... hugs, Bobby