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Candle, candle burning bright, Blow it out, he wasn’t your white knight. A new love is waiting if you give it a chance, But you have to be willing to get up and dance. 4/11/16 Contest No 211 Any Form-Any Theme Max of 14 Lines Sponsor: Brian Strand Awarded 8th Place

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Francis J Grasso

Date: 9/26/2016 9:54:00 PM

Nicely done! Congratulations, Brenda! ...Fran

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 9/26/2016 10:01:00 PM

Thank you so much Fran!

Lu Loo

Date: 9/26/2016 7:06:00 PM

very cute Brenda! congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 9/26/2016 7:11:00 PM

Thank you Laura!

Kathryn Dorion

Date: 9/10/2016 1:04:00 PM

As you know Brenda I am a "get up and dance" girl every day!!!

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 9/10/2016 1:08:00 PM

Yes, that is your motto! :)

Carlo Lazzari

Date: 6/22/2016 5:29:00 PM

An interesting mix of art on a poetic palette with sounds (burning), colours (white), soul (love), dance. A wise Stravinsky into rhymes with a progressive Crescendo that accompanies the last rhyme. The first rhyme Candle, candle ...) has the same numbers of notes of the Overture of Beethoven 5th. Classic that ending in Romantic. Well done!

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/22/2016 6:05:00 PM

Wow, that sure is a thorough critique. Thank you! I didn't know all that about my simple poem. Makes me feel good! I love Beethoven's 5th overture.

Brian Cecil

Date: 6/21/2016 7:24:00 PM

The makings of a song I would say.

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/21/2016 7:55:00 PM

You are right, that has the makings of a song! I would have to add lyrics. :) Thanks.

Rainbow Promise

Date: 6/21/2016 5:42:00 PM

SOUNDS LIKE A RHYME POTION OF LOVE, AS BREWING TAKES PLACE AROUND THE POT OVER FIRE; CALLING THE CANDLE'S BRIGHTNESS TO GO FIND IT!

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/21/2016 7:06:00 PM

Maybe it could be a rhyme potion of love :) Thanks for your comment.

Tanja Cilia

Date: 6/21/2016 4:10:00 PM

I love it! This is the kind of rhyme you sing when you play with two balls, flipping them against the ground so they hit the wall, and juggling them! More, please!

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/21/2016 4:51:00 PM

Haha! I never thought of that! Thank you Tanja!

Chris Hagy

Date: 6/21/2016 3:31:00 PM

Lovely Brenda...sometimes we dance with a few toads before we find prince charming, haha!...nice write.

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/21/2016 3:34:00 PM

Yes I commented to someone lately I needed to write a poem called "The Toad Not Taken." I am getting tired of the toads now, ready for a good one. :) Thanks Chris

Kathleen Kroll

Date: 6/21/2016 2:57:00 PM

Enjoyed all your poems. There is a joy about them that keeps you wanting to read more. I bet it would be fun to be your friend. Congrats on your lifetime membership

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/21/2016 3:04:00 PM

Kathleen, thank you, I appreciate your comment. We can be on-line friends!

Kelli White

Date: 6/21/2016 2:37:00 PM

Very cute and honest.

Stanley Harris

Date: 6/21/2016 1:13:00 PM

I read all you poems. They were so nice. Had those $ been £s, Would have been nice. As I would have claimed them In a trice. And become a premium member. Which would be so nice. Very entertaining prose, cheered me up as was feeling low. Thank you. Don't loose that poetry bug, will you? (The new mad Author)

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/21/2016 2:00:00 PM

Thank you Stanley, I enjoyed your rhyming reply! Glad it cheered you.

Regina Williams

Date: 6/21/2016 11:53:00 AM

...."you have to be willing to get up and dance" just a beautiful yet simplicit analogy ...do the work to get the man that you desire. I love this!!!

Brenda Mcgrath
Date: 6/21/2016 2:01:00 PM

Thank you Regina!