get to my place get lost
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Poetic Form: Tanka
Inspired: 2024 May 04
Image: N/A
trip yourself my way
no siesta at borders
cross right for a swim
until you're breathless and lost
to my words~first to my place
Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2024
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