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Poetic Form: Tanka
Inspired: 2024 May 04
Image: N/A

get to my place get lost

trip yourself my way no siesta at borders cross right for a swim until you're breathless and lost to my words~first to my place
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Buhagiar Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 3:41 AM
Loved it with shades of romance.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 5, 2024 at 4:06 AM
Yes, Victor, a PC society, that's age-friendly, with TPS saying Adios. I say, Aloha, my age-friendly friend, William
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