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Get Real

the real you is what i want the world to finally see. that cold-hearted person who really 
doesnt care. who cant help but notice my down falls and my flaws . to always voice your 
opinion about how much u waste your time on me . how perfect you are to the public eye but 
imperfect in our relationship.show the world that human that uses the word love to control 
and feels that putting your hands on me is yourway to show that i have a place and should 
be kept THERE GET REAL

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Date: 2/12/2010 7:45:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all ... as this delight tonight... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 2/12/2010 4:13:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ciara. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/12/2010 2:45:00 PM
Powerful. Get away from that negativity. You deserve better. Thanks for sharing.
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