Lin Lane Poet Villanelle

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Get Ready Contest  ~  December 21, 2023

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Cheerful, the splendor of the Christmas gift
When stars glimmer like bright crystalline light
Season of joy when our hearts need a lift

Dreams, like snowflakes, can tumble and drift
Our eyes are filled with love, glistening bright
Cheerful, the splendor of the Christmas gift

It's a time to mend each troublesome rift
Releasing quarrels of old to take flight
Season of joy when our hearts need a lift

There are cookies to bake, and flour to sift
While children stir so they can steal a bite
Cheerful, the splendor of the Christmas gift

No mistletoe, so we have to makeshift
With holly and a fire for warmth at night
Season of joy when our hearts need a lift

The passage of holidays are too swift
Much too quickly, it's all gone from our sight
Cheerful, the splendor of the Christmas gift
Season of joy when our hearts need a lift.

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Jay Narain December 21, 2023 at 11:03 AM Great Villanelle on Christmas spirit. Lin Lane December 21, 2023 at 11:07 AM Thank you very much for you encouraging remarks, Jay.

Tom Cunningham December 21, 2023 at 11:00 AM A perfect villanelle Lin, you captured the build up so well. Good luck in the contest. Tom. PS. Will give you the nod tomorrow. Hope you're feeling better now. Lin Lane December 21, 2023 at 11:04 AM Thanks for the support, Tom. I'm feeling fine... thanks for asking. Things are all set.

Sam Kauffman December 21, 2023 at 10:52 AM Lin, your words dance and sing like a joyful villanelle! This form is perfect to reinforce your "season of joy" in all of its various forms from baking cookies to mistletoe to starlight and warm fires and so much more. I felt the coziness of your words! Sending you blessings of joy! Merry Christmas to you and your family! Lin Lane December 21, 2023 at 11:06 AM Thank you very much, Sam. I don't usually write Christmas poems like this one, but I think it has merit for everyone who enjoys the goodwill that is present in the season.