Joseph May Poet Free verse

Get Off My Cloud

You act so proper and proud
 Thinking you're better than the rest of us
 But  up here no snobs are allowed
 So there's just one thing left to say
 Hey you,  get  of my cloud!

 Your words are a sham
 Your comments are rude
 You have the manners of a pig
 And you look like one too
 So there's just one thing left to say 
 Hey you, get off my cloud!

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Poet Destroyer A June 18, 2015 at 11:43 PM JOSEPH, Congratulations on your cloud win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Skat A June 16, 2015 at 9:15 PM Hello Joseph,, Congratulations on a poem well done. Thank you for entering my CLOUD contest. Luv SKAT Joseph May June 17, 2015 at 5:41 AM Thank you for my placement Skat

Cecilia Macfarlane June 5, 2015 at 1:11 PM Terrific slam Joe! Glad you keep your cloud snob free : ) Hugs

Sara Kendrick June 5, 2015 at 8:50 AM Reads like a winner..Way to go with this slam..Sara..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Eve Roper June 3, 2015 at 10:46 PM Joseph, another wonderful poem a 7 and good luck in the contest. Thank you for your visit and reading “When A Woman Is Just A Woman”. :~) Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich June 3, 2015 at 10:09 PM I LOL to read "you have the manners of a pig and you look like one too" Oh my, could you be thinking of the same person I am thinking of? In any event, this was sure a chuckler.

Paul Callus June 3, 2015 at 12:48 PM I see that there is no need for too many words in order to produce a high quality slam. Well done Joseph! #7 // paul

Harry Horsman June 1, 2015 at 8:21 AM That,s telling them Joseph, this is good, truly is very good

Jan Allison June 1, 2015 at 7:18 AM ha ha ha - I have a feeling Skat will love this one! Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx