Notes About The Poem

My Footle.

Get Down

Get Down!


My room

so small

or I'm

too tall

To get

into

my room

at all

I must

get down

and start

to crawl

My room

a hole

inside

my wall.


Edwin C Hofert
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 8:30 PM
LOL, Edwin, I am not teasing you.. I stuck with the name and haven't removed it. I am no threat. Probably the sweetest poet you will ever meet... HUGS..LINDA
Hofert Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 8:42 PM
:) Good to know :) Hugs back at ya :)
A   Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 2:17 PM
Edwin, Congrats on your FOOTLE POEM win. LINDA
Hofert Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 2:24 PM
Seriously? :) The name Poet Destroyer could imply that you're just teasing me lol. No offense intended. But seriously?
Dietrich Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 10:39 PM
what a cute short story you made with these. BIG congrats in the contest. I really enjoyed these.
Hofert Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 6:36 AM
:) Thank you Andrea. God bless!
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