Subimal Sinha-Roy Poet Rhyme

Get Busy With Life

Idleness corrupts mind empty,
dragged by devil to ditch of sin.
With virtuous life get busy,
divine treasure of bliss you’ll win.

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July 7, 2022
Syllable count : 8 per line (HMS)
Contest : Sin Of Sloth
Sponsored by : Margarita Lillico

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Unseeking Seeker July 7, 2022 at 2:43 AM The concluding line is the clincher, Subimal. Good luck in the contest

Mahtab Bangalee July 6, 2022 at 11:50 PM virtuous life will get divine bliss~