Get Away

Get away,
a fuel for emotion,
commotion of the Louvre
lifted from its demure, cinematic complacency;
someone plays the fool, the jester, wearing a crown
that doesn’t belong on the pumpkin’s head.

Get away;
chasing the bag of bones mutt down the street,
offering him nothing but your feet; to be gotten
is all the fleabag wants; cool water and chow.
Lies down, paw on vagrant’s thigh, licks empty hand.

A getaway we much prefer, a mountain retreat,
the pink rose and plumes of smoke at the peak,
a rustic cabin with couple-amenities, serenity,
closeness, places to go, to play, to eat, to spend.

Get away - a cataclysm, a gotcha, a zone.
A mixed bag of razors and diamond candy.
The Louvre, my love closed. A tourist trapped.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Maverick Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 3:16 PM
Get away..' Many thoughts.? On what On how that happens Kim.? Much effort In life ( making memories.?) Keeping photo albums, and other mechanisams To hold on.' Yet we are on a journey.' No human can stop.' Hmmm??
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 10:57 AM
Join the party of ups and downs, hope the Louvre wasn't closed, not a place you want to miss that. Last year, my daughter and her family in Seattle took me to Yellowstone, but it was closed because of a shooter killing tourists, okay, mayhaps not too bad missing that place. Nice, razz-ma-tazz piece, spice and all. Aloha.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 12:52 PM
Thank you! So delighted to hear from you. Thankfully when I visited the Louvre it was open, many years ago. How hard it would be to be in Paris as a first time tourist and not be able to see the wonderful museum! Crazy about Yellowstone. We may go visit when it is warmer, hopefully without mayhem! Aloha and blessings, sweet friend!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 6:09 PM
your poem made me want to escape to a cabin....seriously...so serene and captivating
Rodrigues Avatar
October 25, 2025 at 12:52 PM
We did that last weekend..so delightful! Hugs!
Hind Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 11:31 AM
This is so much- I almost wish I could go, lol. I am glad you're posting again - I almost sent SoupMail and wondered where you were! I did not want to intrude. This is serene. I could see you with a cup of coffee standing at the open doorway of your cabin, looking at the mountains, beautiful <3
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 11:44 AM
Thanks for missing me! We had nice time at cabin and thereabouts! xx
Andresen Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 11:12 AM
- "A mixed bag of razors and diamond candy"... go away take the bag with you ... you pollute the air ... - Powerful poem, Kim - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 11:44 AM
LOL! Hugs
Rodgers Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 9:53 AM
Dear Kim, This one’s wild and layered, like three getaways tangled into one. I love how you move from chaos and street grit to mountain serenity, then flip it again into something sharp and surreal. Autumn Blessings, Dear Kim, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 11:45 AM
Thanks so much, Daniel! Smiling!
Goldsmith Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 9:16 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Get Away" write. The question is, for how long??? Great Ending... Have a wonderful day writing away..............
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 11:45 AM
4 days..l wonderful time! Hugs
Greenhough Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 8:13 AM
The bet says, "they'll be caught". I hope the Smithsonian tightens protocol after this intricate thievery. I like the history in museums. I applaud your poem. I feel its urgency.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 21, 2025 at 11:52 AM
I bet thy will be! Clever scoundrels…
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