Beata Agustin Poet Enclosed Rhyme

GET A LIFE YON EXISTENCE

Get a life, surpassing existence-birth
Such is God’s gift toward enjoyment bliss
Midst adventures with lessons not to miss
Optimizing strength midst well-being mirth.

Get a life, conquering survival plight
Thanking the Lord*, Source of gracious breath… blest
Along kindness in doing very best
Each day, serene with functional delight.

*Ephesians 5:20 Giving thanks always for all things unto God and the Father in the name of our Lord Jesus Christ.

February 11, 2025
4th place, "That's Life: A Different Kind of Challenge" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich; judged on 3/2/2025

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Sara Kendrick March 4, 2025 at 7:13 AM Dropping by to say congratulations on your winning work. So nice to see it in the winners' list. Way to go. Sara K

thriveni c mysore March 2, 2025 at 7:58 PM pious write. beautiful message. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!

Andrea Dietrich March 2, 2025 at 2:28 PM Good use of enclosed rhyme, Beata. Congrats in my contest.

Eve Roper February 11, 2025 at 10:47 AM Very spiritual write, enjoyed reading.