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Get a Life

'Get a life' arrow-words, jarring, ripping the womb of reality. and the entrails of possibilities gush forth to form redemptive streams. 'Get a life' Drill-bit words, tunnelling iron mountains like a train given new life, like a train given new life. Shouted words dashed against prior knowledge, striking a fitting richochet. The man in the mirror picks himself up, dons his courage and begins a new trek on the trail of time.

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Date: 10/19/2024 10:47:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/23/2016 9:43:00 PM
Rohan Facey, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/2/2016 12:08:00 AM
ROHAN, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF HAPPY 2016. ...... SKAT
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Date: 7/8/2014 4:31:00 PM
Great write. Your gift for poetry is true. Sherese
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