Get Your Premium Membership

Gerbils Poem

Gerbils poem Two black eyes Peep out of the bedding A quivering nose And not much more A tail as thick As a bit of string It is a gerbil Is it not? Two blue eyes Look into my bedding Arms and legs And a good deed more Clumsy and huge I wonder why It grows so slow And grows so high It is a person Is it not? Copyright © 2017 Diane Cassels

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/18/2025 10:03:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/18/2017 12:40:00 AM
I don't know :) It's an intriguing first poem you have written for PoetrySoup. Welcome!
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things