Gently Now, Gently

Thinking of you in crimson dawn rising
Voice of fervid night keeps calling me
Naming the lady of my fabulous dreams
Meet me I say, gleaming amber glory
Start right there, where you left me
Whispering to beats of sensuous feelings

Listen to words waltzing verses of lyrics
Pulsing cadence of your heart’s music
Letting the chorus of smitten souls sing
Pleasing our tunes of euphoric melodies
As you dazzle me like glamorous painting
Upon the canvas of my sensual gallery

I hear you saying, “don’t try to rush me
Read me like a magical script of fantasy
Gently now, gently, unfold me softly
Kiss me like you love me, kiss me fervently
Gently now, gently, unwrap me slowly
Blossoming in bosom of love’s ecstasy”

Let my desires bloom in your spring
Thriving like pink lilies, doting zestfully
Whirling like nectar in fragrant ruby winds
Luring the tempo of butterfly wings
Arousing titillation of seductive reverie
Blushing my face in rhapsodic revelry

When you hear the sigh of surrender
Subjugating me in embrace of your zeal
Winning plea of my zealous appeal
Ready I’ll be love, to write my story
Upon the pages of your life’s allegory
Revealing secrets of romantic odyssey

I hear you saying, “don’t try to rush me
Read me like a magical script of fantasy
Gently now, gently, unfold me softly
Kiss me like you love me, kiss me fervently
Gently now, gently, unwrap me slowly
Blossoming in bosom of love’s ecstasy”

Gently now, gently, unfold me softly
Gently now, gently, kiss me fervently
Gently now, gently… gently now, gently…

September 6, 2020
Poem of the day on September 8, 2020
Placed 1st: Pick – A – Title, Vol 22 - -Lyrics 2 – Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
Title chosen: Gently now, gently
Placed 1st: Completely your choice (19) contest
Placed 1st: Battle of most acclaimed 2020 poems by John Hamilton
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Ibeh Avatar
April 25, 2023 at 8:17 PM
Vijay, this poem of yours is so great that I still remember it 3 years later! I forgot to fave it then and I just did.
Evans Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations my friend. Excellent poem.
Pandit Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 6:37 AM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate.
Ibeh Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 1:08 PM
YES! I'm so happy to see this deservingly win 1st place in a contest again, Vijay:-) It was a pleasure to read this masterpiece yet again, my friend. One of your very best poems, ever. Congrats!
Pandit Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 2:42 PM
Thank you my friend. Your words of approval mean a lot. Much appreciate your return visit.
Hamilton Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 11:00 AM
Congrats Vijay with a top win, what a beautiful write!
Pandit Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 2:41 PM
Honored to win your contest, John. Thrilled by your vote of approval--which I certainly value. Many many thanks.
Cholt Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 3:13 PM
Textual layers of delight. A beautiful cadence runs through this poem. Belated congratulations on POTD.
Pandit Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 4:01 PM
Much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks.
Hamilton Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 7:24 AM
Well now Vijay, how did I miss this beauty? Congrats on every accolade so far, with more to come no doubt. This is a song for the ages, an instant classic! Now number 1 on best new poems. This may end up in the top 100 all time. Saving this beauty into my faves!
Pandit Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 8:00 AM
That is so nice to hear--especially from you John as I look up to you ..as the expert on lyrics on Poetry Soup. Your visits are always an honor. Much appreciate--many thanks for your kindness. And a special thank you for the FAVE.
Kaufman Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 5:39 AM
belated congratulations on your win. I especially liked "read me like a magical script of fantasy"..thanks Vijay...
Pandit Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 5:41 AM
Thank you Nancy for your visit and comments--much appreciate.
Gentile Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 4:20 AM
Congratulations Vijay on all of the well deserved accolades for your wonderfully romantic and sensual work. Well done !!
Pandit Avatar
October 4, 2020 at 6:16 AM
Thank you Mike--much appreciate.
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 1:56 PM
Vijay Congrats on your win. Got to read this just today. Very impressed and well deserved POTD!
Pandit Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 2:44 PM
Thank you Krish--much appreciate your visit and comments.
B. Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 12:01 PM
Congratulations on your first place win, Vijay! Your exquisite write definitely had me mesmerized.. It literally captivates my heart and soul! Indeed a Magnificent write, dear friend.. Really enjoyed! Many blessings to you..
Pandit Avatar
October 3, 2020 at 2:45 PM
Thank you Robertina--much appreciate. Haven't seen you much lately.
Canerdy Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 8:06 PM
I'm back to deliver a big CONGRATS, Vijay! Janice
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 4:58 AM
Much appreciate Janice--many thanks.
Ibeh Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 4:05 PM
Great to see you keep racking up first place wins with this masterpiece, Vijay:-) Congratulations once again!
Pandit Avatar
October 2, 2020 at 1:02 PM
Many thanks to you, of course! Much appreciate Edward.
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October 1, 2020 at 3:23 PM
Congratulations! To my faves! Best wishes, Mala
Pandit Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 3:28 PM
So very kind of you Mala--much appreciate--many thanks. A very special thank you for the FAVE.
Crabtree Avatar
September 30, 2020 at 6:24 PM
This could be a song. We could all use some gentleness. Lovely write. Peace, Angie
Pandit Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 5:14 AM
Much appreciate Angela--many thanks.
Andresen Avatar
September 25, 2020 at 12:53 PM
- It had to be a winning poem :) - Congratulations on your first place in the contest, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 5:39 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise--much appreciate.
Watt Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 3:07 PM
Very nice song Vijay, with overtones of nature, romance and musical references. It was great to read it again today. Congrats on your top placement in the contest ~ John
Pandit Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 5:39 AM
Thank you John--much appreciate.
Ibeh Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 2:35 PM
What can I say? Just flat-out brilliant poetry, Vijay:-) No wonder this also won you POTD kudos. Congrats on that and earning a top win in my contest!
Pandit Avatar
September 26, 2020 at 5:38 AM
Thank you Edward--much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.
Deepa Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 1:02 PM
Gently now,gently....such a gentle romantic write dear Vijay sir....amazing lyric..Enjoyed each lines ..and middle stanzas are outstanding.. especially fifth one..:-) well done ..my best wishes for it to be placed on top... How are you sir?..I believe your doing well. Take care.Warm regards sent to you..:-)
Pandit Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 1:56 PM
All is well. Hope you are too. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Deepa--many thanks.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 13, 2020 at 6:33 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 1:55 PM
Thank you Kim--much appreciate.
May Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 3:35 PM
Such a beautiful lyric Vijay, Great write..
Pandit Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 4:04 AM
Much appreciate Joseph--many thanks.
Sands Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 3:01 PM
This is excellent Vijay and Congratulations for POTD :)
Pandit Avatar
September 12, 2020 at 4:04 AM
Thank you Heidi--much appreciate. Hope you are feeling well.
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 3:59 PM
wow, so gorgeous, Vijay and I see a POTD too. Congrats, my friend.
Pandit Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 1:23 PM
Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 1:31 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Magical script describes this poem perfectly. Such choice of words that makes the whole poem vibrant with emotions.
Pandit Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 1:23 PM
Thank you Victor--much appreciate. Glad you are back.
One Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 1:45 AM
Belated congrats on POTD my friend.
Pandit Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 1:22 PM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate, SO.
Daniel Avatar
September 10, 2020 at 12:51 AM
Romance is in the air, well done, Vijay:)
Pandit Avatar
September 11, 2020 at 1:22 PM
Thank you Jo--much appreciate.
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