Gentle Hearts

i was young and frail and broken hearted, lived with a soft heart completely guarded- right then our eloquent romance started and since that day we have never parted together a new journey we have charted, grieving with peace for the ones departed- my barren skin aches; your touch imparted, passion ignites...true love is regarded
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 1.2.19 First Time Here - Any Monorhyme Poetry Contest Sponsor: William Kekaula
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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 15, 2020 at 3:06 PM
Beautifully done LuLoo, lovely as always and thanks for your participation my poetess friend, and my compliments on your 1st place win~@wk
Theraven Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 7:42 PM
Lovely hearts in this Monorhyme Lu Loo. -Richard
Goldsmith Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 11:38 AM
So very beautiful. I love it. Good Luck........
Dietrich Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 9:29 PM
This is beautifully sweet, Lu Loo. How was your Christmas and new year? I did not celebrate new year eve (as is my custom as my husband lies there snoring by 10 pm.!)
Adams Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 10:42 AM
this is a beautifully penned monorhyme Laura...love the story of love within... best wishes in the contest :) hugs
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