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Gentle Hearts

i was young and frail and broken hearted, lived with a soft heart completely guarded- right then our eloquent romance started and since that day we have never parted together a new journey we have charted, grieving with peace for the ones departed- my barren skin aches; your touch imparted, passion ignites...true love is regarded
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 1.2.19 First Time Here - Any Monorhyme Poetry Contest Sponsor: William Kekaula

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Date: 1/15/2020 3:06:00 PM
Beautifully done LuLoo, lovely as always and thanks for your participation my poetess friend, and my compliments on your 1st place win~@wk
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Date: 1/5/2020 7:42:00 PM
Lovely hearts in this Monorhyme Lu Loo. -Richard
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Date: 1/4/2020 11:38:00 AM
So very beautiful. I love it. Good Luck........
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Date: 1/2/2020 9:29:00 PM
This is beautifully sweet, Lu Loo. How was your Christmas and new year? I did not celebrate new year eve (as is my custom as my husband lies there snoring by 10 pm.!)
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Date: 1/2/2020 10:42:00 AM
this is a beautifully penned monorhyme Laura...love the story of love within... best wishes in the contest :) hugs
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