Gentle Breeze

the gentle breeze~

    wafted by it gently...

         caressed me...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Babcock Avatar
September 7, 2008 at 10:09 AM
Nice peaceful, tranquil feelings on this piece. God Bless Phyl
Spence Sr Avatar
September 5, 2008 at 9:30 AM
This is just wonderful. This piece is appealing to the stimulating sense of touch. I like the feel of the gentle breeze in the morning and at sunset. Great job! ~Joseph
Strand Avatar
September 4, 2008 at 11:56 PM
Its a lovely feeling you conjure up here D-nyce.Nice workRgds Brian & thanks for your welcome observations
Kelly Avatar
September 4, 2008 at 11:10 PM
Easy reading.... Nice and relaxing piece , D-nyce ....
Foulk Avatar
September 4, 2008 at 8:54 PM
a great warm Haiku, enjoyed reading it. thank you for reading my heart wept for her and for your comment.
Jordan Avatar
September 4, 2008 at 4:31 PM
This is a very peaceful and relaxing Haiku - Enjoyed the read - God Bless
Richards Avatar
September 4, 2008 at 3:21 PM
A dreamy little poem!...Nice!~ Carrie
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