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Genesis

It's cold and Raining
   I feel embodied with your 
      Love on my shoulders

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Contest: leather jacket on shoulders
5/28/13

Copyright © Judy Konos | Year Posted 2013

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July 4, 2013 at 12:10 AM

"tremendously awesome........... congrats!!! SKAT"

June 29, 2013 at 5:33 AM

Simply beautiful. Congrats on your win

June 26, 2013 at 2:43 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

June 2, 2013 at 3:08 PM

That is a great way to do the contest!! I had done a tanka and later realized I had used it in the wrong context (forgot it was a cold rainy day!)

Richard Lamoureux

May 30, 2013 at 9:22 AM

I like it!

Barbara Gorelick

May 28, 2013 at 5:45 PM

Very clever.!!.BG

May 28, 2013 at 4:33 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Very creative for sure..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 28, 2013 at 12:51 PM

- You make it beautiful, Judy! - Luck in contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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