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Generic Bleach

Little do I care if bleach is generic
Or if fabric softener or detergent
Some bad personality flaws become chronic
Little do I care, if well you really meant

What brings me care is negative remarks spoken_
Harsh words pour forth like rain released kinetic
Energy, power released never to be unbroken
Words that leave my heart's state of being semantic

Semantic=Affected role

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Red Fiery

May 29, 2011 at 12:10 PM

i agree with your views sara ! Very well written

Poet Destroyer A

May 29, 2011 at 2:49 AM

You are right Sara, i think we are being tricked in the markets... nice poem,, can be a lesson,,, god bless,..p.d.

Kash Poet

May 28, 2011 at 9:20 PM

So true the above words Sara.Enjoyed.

James Foulk

May 28, 2011 at 11:13 AM

its all about making more money, Generic things work just as well. love you write, very creative. thank you for commenting on Puddles on sidewalk

Skat A

May 27, 2011 at 9:06 PM

really xool

Sarah Seraphin

May 27, 2011 at 6:27 PM

* “I Do Agree With Your Beauty * Beautiful Sara. * First Whom Is Perfect & We All Fall * Second That Yesss Words Can Linger * Time Hopefully Irons Out These Wrinkles of Ones Self * Yet Even Then Amid The State of Frailty Flesh Resides Within * Perfection Shall Have to Wait * But * I Love Your Wisdoms Voice Here * Along With The Beauty of Your Depthful Heart. * Hugs & Kissses * Kissses & Hugs * Always & Forever * Sarah” *

Matt Hunt

May 27, 2011 at 4:04 PM

Very good twist. I enjoyed this one very much.

Anne Rutherford

May 27, 2011 at 3:45 PM

Sara , you are so right about harsh words , even if someone says sorry, they stay in your soul never to be unspoken .Profound poem. Anne

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 27, 2011 at 2:24 PM

negative anything is so very hurtful and harmful to the human spirit as being made in the image of God we should all shine positive lights.. a brilliant piece my friend with much said in this magnificent poem luv.. happy holiday weekend to u..