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a soft gentle touch feels the warm pulse of guidance of a calloused hand __________________________________________ *note: this is a newborn touching his father's hand.

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James Fraser

Date: 10/31/2009 8:30:00 AM

Raul, i have been fortunate to have been graced with this four times, and i now feel that moment reading your sentimental Senyru, this should be going into all the favs of the parents, and all who want to be parents. It's certainly going into mine >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/26/2009 6:07:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Raul. Wishing you a great week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/25/2009 12:59:00 PM

You have painted a wonderful picture into my mind's eye. What a heart warmer.! ~ Carrie

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/25/2009 10:00:00 AM

A soft gentle touch creates miracles..beautiful--Charma

Date: 10/25/2009 9:26:00 AM

Wow! What a beautiful scene. So much said in just three lines. The emotion comes through your words. Thank you for sharing this senryu with us and for your kind comments. Have a good day! Karen

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/25/2009 6:44:00 AM

really beautiful! Raul, jim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/25/2009 4:48:00 AM

Glad that you gave the explanation because the women could go all kinds of ways with this one. I love the way that you expressed this one. I can see the scene. Keep writing. Sara

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/25/2009 2:55:00 AM

Hóla Raúl, a mi me gusta mucho este senryu - a soft gentle touch feels the warm pulse of guidance - And thank you for your comments....Gert Isn't it nice that the soup is so international!