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Generations

a soft gentle touch
feels the warm pulse of guidance
of a calloused hand



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*note: this is a newborn touching his father's hand.

Copyright © Raul Moreno | Year Posted 2009

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James Fraser Date: 10/31/2009 8:30:00 AM Raul, i have been fortunate to have been graced with this four times, and i now feel that moment reading your sentimental Senyru, this should be going into all the favs of the parents, and all who want to be parents. It's certainly going into mine >> James Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/26/2009 6:07:00 AM Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Raul. Wishing you a great week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 10/25/2009 12:59:00 PM You have painted a wonderful picture into my mind's eye. What a heart warmer.! ~ Carrie Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 10/25/2009 10:00:00 AM A soft gentle touch creates miracles..beautiful--Charma Login to Reply

Date: 10/25/2009 9:26:00 AM Wow! What a beautiful scene. So much said in just three lines. The emotion comes through your words. Thank you for sharing this senryu with us and for your kind comments. Have a good day! Karen Login to Reply

James Marshall Goff Date: 10/25/2009 6:44:00 AM really beautiful! Raul, jim Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/25/2009 4:48:00 AM Glad that you gave the explanation because the women could go all kinds of ways with this one. I love the way that you expressed this one. I can see the scene. Keep writing. Sara Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 10/25/2009 2:55:00 AM Hóla Raúl, a mi me gusta mucho este senryu - a soft gentle touch feels the warm pulse of guidance - And thank you for your comments....Gert Isn't it nice that the soup is so international! Login to Reply