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i grab my sword and i start walking, the war is now so lets stop talking. with the 
bible as our sword a spirit as our shield my friends and i fight for the field.we push 
them back to the forest, a sneak attack comes and takes a big portion.we fall back 
to the field to get more ground, then call the calvary and tare them down.
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January 19, 2011 at 11:09 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Patrick. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone is willing to help. Love, Carol
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